I spent eight hours on the TCC application Sunday, sitting at the same kitchen table where I do all my real thinking, with the laptop open in front of me and the slow cooker on the counter behind me handling its own job for once. Mama was at the diner from ten to six on a double-shift Sunday, which meant I had the house to myself and the kind of unbroken quiet that’s hard to come by during the school week. The slow cooker was on low under a vegetable soup that was going to be dinner. The application was on the screen. I had a yellow legal pad and three pens and two cold mugs of coffee. I sat down at nine-thirty in the morning and didn’t move from the table except for the bathroom and to lift the slow-cooker lid twice.
The Common App essay I’d been working on for three weeks — the one about Mama’s diner shifts and the green envelope under the silverware drawer and the way a household with two people in it learns the rhythm of tip nights — got cut from eight hundred words to six hundred and forty-two in one afternoon, which is what Mr. Briggs had told me to do when he handed back my second draft: “Cut every word the reader can fill in. The reader is smart. Trust them.” That note was the most useful editorial direction I’ve ever been given. I went through the essay sentence by sentence and asked, of every clause, whether the reader needed me to spell it out or whether the reader could meet me halfway. The cuts I made were ruthless. The essay got faster, sharper, more honest, less explained. Six hundred and forty-two words, twelve sentences shorter, and the green envelope on the last page was now doing all the work that two paragraphs of explanation had been doing in the previous draft.
The TCC-specific essay — the supplemental on why their writing program in particular — took me four hours and three full restarts. The first draft sounded like a brochure regurgitating itself. The second draft sounded like every applicant in America trying to flatter TCC about its English department. The third draft, after I’d gotten up and walked around the yard for fifteen minutes and come back in, started with the line, “I learned to read close at a kitchen table on a Tuesday in Bristow, Oklahoma, with sixty-three green check marks across eleven pages of someone else’s grandmother dying.” Once I had that opener — once the essay was situated somewhere specific instead of floating in college-essay-vagueness — the rest of the supplement came in a forty-five-minute push. I wrote about Marcus Wells, about Iris’s lotion-as-clock detail, about the close-reading muscle the writing program had built that the TCC program would presumably keep building. Five hundred and ninety-eight words. The supplement cap is six hundred.
The soup, meanwhile, had been doing its job in the background the way a good slow-cooker recipe does: carrots, celery, yellow onion, three small Yukon Gold potatoes diced, a can of fire-roasted diced tomatoes with the juice, a can of white beans drained and rinsed, a quart of low-sodium chicken broth, a teaspoon of dried Italian seasoning, a bay leaf, salt, and the secret ingredient I cannot recommend enough — a four-inch parmesan rind I’d been saving in a zip-top bag in the freezer for exactly this purpose. The rind comes off the wedge of parmesan after you’ve grated it down. Don’t throw it out. Drop it into any soup or pot of beans and let it dissolve over four to eight hours of low heat, and it gives you a savory, glutamate-rich base note that no amount of bouillon or broth will replicate. The rind dissolves down to a soft, edible little blob you can either fish out or chop into the soup, and the dissolved cheese gives the broth a slight creaminess and a depth that tastes like somebody’s grandmother spent four hours making it.
Mama came home at six-thirty in her uniform with the diner’s smell on her and ate two bowls standing at the counter while I read her the TCC supplement out loud. She didn’t interrupt. When I finished, she set her empty bowl down on the counter and stood there for a long minute looking at the floor. Then she said, “That’s mine and yours both, baby, and I’m proud of how it sounds.” She said it quietly. She didn’t cry but her voice did the thing it does when she’s holding it. That’s the highest compliment she’s ever given my writing. I saved the document and closed the laptop.
Save the parmesan rinds. Freeze them. Drop them in soup. Here’s the eight-hour pot.
Slow-Cooker Vegetable Soup
Prep Time: 20 minutes | Cook Time: 7 hours | Total Time: 7 hours 20 minutes | Servings: 8
Ingredients
- 2 tablespoons olive oil
- 1 medium yellow onion, diced
- 3 cloves garlic, minced
- 3 medium carrots, peeled and sliced into rounds
- 3 stalks celery, sliced
- 2 medium Yukon Gold potatoes, peeled and cut into 3/4-inch cubes
- 1 medium zucchini, cut into 1/2-inch pieces
- 1 can (14.5 oz) diced tomatoes, undrained
- 1 can (15 oz) green beans, drained, or 1 1/2 cups fresh green beans trimmed and cut
- 1 can (15 oz) kidney beans, drained and rinsed
- 6 cups low-sodium vegetable broth
- 1 teaspoon dried thyme
- 1 teaspoon dried Italian seasoning
- 1/2 teaspoon smoked paprika
- 1 bay leaf
- Salt and black pepper to taste
- 2 cups chopped fresh spinach or kale (added at the end)
Instructions
- Prep the vegetables. Dice the onion, mince the garlic, and chop the carrots, celery, potatoes, and zucchini. If using fresh green beans, trim and cut them into bite-sized pieces.
- Build the base. Add the olive oil, onion, garlic, carrots, celery, and potatoes to the slow cooker. Stir to coat everything lightly.
- Add remaining ingredients. Pour in the diced tomatoes (with juices), green beans, kidney beans, and vegetable broth. Add the thyme, Italian seasoning, smoked paprika, and bay leaf. Stir to combine.
- Cook low and slow. Cover and cook on LOW for 7—8 hours or on HIGH for 4—5 hours, until the potatoes and carrots are completely tender.
- Add the zucchini and greens. In the last 30 minutes of cooking, stir in the zucchini and spinach or kale. Replace the lid and continue cooking until just wilted and tender.
- Finish and season. Remove the bay leaf. Taste and adjust salt and pepper as needed. Ladle into bowls and serve with crusty bread or rolls.
Nutrition (per serving)
Calories: 175 | Protein: 6g | Fat: 4g | Carbs: 30g | Fiber: 7g | Sodium: 420mg