Sarah's full notes arrived Monday morning — thirty-two comments across the manuscript, which sounds like a lot and is the right amount. Most of them are what she called "precision edits": a place where I've been approximate when I should be exact, a sentence that says two things and should say one, a paragraph that ends half a step before the feeling is complete. None of them asked me to change what I meant. They asked me to mean it more completely.
I've been doing revisions in the evenings after chores. It's different work than drafting — closer, more surgical, the kind that requires holding the whole chapter in your head while you adjust one word in the middle of it. I find it satisfying in the way that fine work with a rasp on a hoof wall is satisfying: you can feel when it's right.
December arrived and the valley went still. This happens every year and I'm still not fully prepared for it — the particular silence of a Montana winter, the way sound travels differently in cold air, the way even the horses seem to move more quietly as if they've agreed to turn the volume down. I lit the woodstove for the first time Monday morning and the smell of the first fire of the season is one of the smells I'd carry with me if I could carry smells.
Tom called Tuesday. He's been approached by a publisher in Missoula about the third book — a larger press than the Bozeman outfit, with wider distribution. He wanted to talk through the pros and cons, which were essentially: more reach versus less control over the thing itself. I told him the reach didn't matter if the book lost the voice. He said that was what he thought, and thanked me, and I could tell he'd already made his decision before he called — he just wanted someone to agree with it out loud.
Potato and leek soup this week, slow and simple. December food: heavy, warming, designed for a body that has been cold. I made a big pot and ate from it for four days. Patrick likes it with extra cream, which I added without mentioning it.
The soup in the story wasn’t a project — it was a given, the same way lighting the woodstove was a given once the valley went quiet. Potato leek soup is what I make when December asks something of me and I don’t have much left to give the kitchen; it’s naturally gluten free, it rewards low attention, and a single pot carries you through most of the week. I added Patrick’s extra cream without announcing it, and I’ll do it again.
Best Gluten Free Dinner Recipes: Creamy Potato Leek Soup
Prep Time: 15 minutes | Cook Time: 40 minutes | Total Time: 55 minutes | Servings: 6
Ingredients
- 3 tablespoons unsalted butter
- 3 large leeks, white and light green parts only, cleaned and sliced thin
- 3 cloves garlic, minced
- 2 pounds Yukon Gold potatoes, peeled and cut into 1-inch cubes
- 4 cups gluten-free chicken or vegetable broth
- 1 cup heavy cream (plus more to taste)
- 1 teaspoon kosher salt, plus more to season
- 1/2 teaspoon black pepper
- 1/4 teaspoon white pepper
- 2 tablespoons fresh chives, chopped (optional, for serving)
Instructions
- Soften the leeks. Melt butter in a large heavy pot over medium-low heat. Add the sliced leeks and a pinch of salt. Cook, stirring occasionally, until the leeks are completely softened and beginning to turn translucent, about 10–12 minutes. Do not rush this step — it builds the base flavor of the soup.
- Add garlic. Stir in the minced garlic and cook for 1 minute, until fragrant.
- Add potatoes and broth. Add the cubed potatoes and pour in the broth. Increase heat to medium-high and bring to a boil, then reduce to a steady simmer. Cook uncovered until the potatoes are completely tender and beginning to fall apart, about 20–25 minutes.
- Blend. Use an immersion blender to blend the soup until smooth, or carefully transfer in batches to a standing blender. Blend to your preferred texture — fully smooth or left slightly rustic both work well.
- Finish with cream. Return the soup to low heat. Stir in the heavy cream and adjust seasoning with salt, black pepper, and white pepper. Simmer gently for 5 minutes to let the flavors come together. Add a second pour of cream if you like it richer.
- Serve. Ladle into bowls and top with fresh chives if using. Serve with crusty gluten-free bread or on its own. Stores well refrigerated for up to 4 days — it thickens as it sits; thin with a little broth when reheating.
Nutrition (per serving)
Calories: 310 | Protein: 5g | Fat: 18g | Carbs: 34g | Fiber: 3g | Sodium: 520mg